It is important that you are bothered by things because they aren’t right. If your bothered about it then that might make you change the things in life that aren’t right. It’s also important to be bothered because if you aren’t then that means you don’t care.Three examples are hunger and abuse. “12 million children die before they turn 5, eastern and southern Africa has only 5% of the world’s population but it’s more than ½ the world’s population living with HIV, and 40% of homeless men are veterans.” It’s unfair that these things are happening to people. This shouldn’t be happening. We need to do something to change it. NOW!
I really like how you gave a long list of example on things that shouldn't be happening in the world. You also gave some really good information that I had no idea about before reading this. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you included some facts that can allow people to see what they should be bothered by, and why they should be bothered. The facts were all let me see why I need to be bothered. You did really well! :-)
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used the facts as examples on why we should be bothered, I think it makes people more motivated to be bothered by things, awesome job!
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